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From: John Scudder <jgs@juniper.net>
To: Rich Salz <rsalz@akamai.com>, "draft-ietf-lsr-isis-flood-reflection.all@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-lsr-isis-flood-reflection.all@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [Last-Call] Secdir last call review of draft-ietf-lsr-isis-flood-reflection-10
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Thanks for the review, Rich. One tiny nit, mostly for the authors:

> On Oct 3, 2022, at 12:23 PM, Rich Salz via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
> 
> s/could be in most extreme case/could be in THE most extreme case/

Please don’t put “the” in all caps when you do the edit. Even though there’s no formal restriction on using all caps for non-keywords in our documents, some reviewers get upset about it for anything that’s not an RFC 2119 keyword. Let’s not upset them.

Thanks,

—John

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