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Re: [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-oauth-rar-15

Robert Sparks <rjsparks@nostrum.com> Thu, 17 November 2022 22:44 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-oauth-rar-15
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Apologies - an upload fumble left -00 empty. I've revised it to have 
content at -01.

RjS

On 11/17/22 4:36 PM, Robert Sparks via Datatracker wrote:
> Reviewer: Robert Sparks
> Review result: Ready with Issues
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> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
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> Document: draft-ietf-oauth-rar-??
> Reviewer: Robert Sparks
> Review Date: 2022-11-17
> IETF LC End Date: 2022-11-17
> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
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> Summary:
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> Major issues:
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> Minor issues:
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