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Lars Eggert <lars@eggert.org> Thu, 20 October 2022 12:08 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Last-Call] [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dnsop-dnssec-bcp-03
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Linda, thank you for your review. I have entered a Discuss ballot for this document based on my own review.

Lars

> On 2022-10-4, at 1:18, Linda Dunbar via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
> 
> Reviewer: Linda Dunbar
> Review result: Ready with Issues
> 
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
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> Document: draft-ietf-dnsop-dnssec-bcp-03
> Reviewer: Linda Dunbar
> Review Date: 2022-10-03
> IETF LC End Date: 2022-10-05
> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
> 
> Summary:
> This draft is supposed to provide a comprehensive guideline and list of all the
> RFCs for people interested in deploying DNSSEC.
> 
> Major issues:
> 
> Minor issues:
> 
> Nits/editorial comments:
> Section 1.2 (Implementing DNSSEC) states that some of the DNSSEC-related RFCs
> have significant errata.
> 
> Is it possible to have a link to list those errata? so that people can easily
> access them.
> 
> I am not an expert in DNSSEC. It has been overwhelming going through so many
> RFCs for different aspects of the DNSSEC. It will be nicer if someone can write
> a deployment guideline in addition to this draft of listing all the RFCs. Thank
> you very much Linda Dunbar
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