Re: [Lime] Ben Campbell's No Objection on draft-ietf-lime-yang-connectionless-oam-14: (with COMMENT)

Ben Campbell <ben@nostrum.com> Thu, 26 October 2017 05:00 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Lime] Ben Campbell's No Objection on draft-ietf-lime-yang-connectionless-oam-14: (with COMMENT)
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> On Oct 25, 2017, at 11:48 PM, Qin Wu <bill.wu@huawei.com> wrote:
> 
> -6, third paragraph: " writable/creatable/deletable": Please don't use "/" as a substitute for conjunctions.
> 
> [Qin]: This follows template defined in YANG security guideline
> https://trac.ietf.org/trac/ops/wiki/yang-security-guidelines
> But if you like, we can change this.

It probably makes sense to stick with the template.