[Lsr] Lars Eggert's No Objection on draft-ietf-lsr-rfc8920bis-04: (with COMMENT)

[Lars Eggert via Datatracker <[e-mail]>]

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draft-ietf-lsr-rfc8920bis-04: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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# GEN AD review of draft-ietf-lsr-rfc8920bis-03

CC @larseggert

Thanks to Roni Even for the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) review
(https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/cC3DuuZVG_NAjLDNQMr_P5B14E8).

## Nits

All comments below are about very minor potential issues that you may choose to
address in some way - or ignore - as you see fit. Some were flagged by
automated tools (via https://github.com/larseggert/ietf-reviewtool), so there
will likely be some false positives. There is no need to let me know what you
did with these suggestions.

### Grammar/style

#### Section 12.3.2, paragraph 1
```
ications. It is, however, RECOMMENDED to advertise all link attributes for RS
                          ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
```
The verb "RECOMMENDED" is used with the gerund form.

#### Section 14.1, paragraph 1
```
ch they MUST NOT be used. A new sub-section discussing the use of zero-lengt
                                ^^^^^^^^^^^
```
This word is normally spelled as one.

#### Section 16.1, paragraph 9
```
C 8920 included the following acknowledgements: Thanks to Chris Bowers for h
                              ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
```
Do not mix variants of the same word ("acknowledgement" and "acknowledgment")
within a single text.

## Notes

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[`ietf-comments` tool][ICT] to automatically convert this review into
individual GitHub issues. Review generated by the [`ietf-reviewtool`][IRT].

[ICMF]: https://github.com/mnot/ietf-comments/blob/main/format.md
[ICT]: https://github.com/mnot/ietf-comments
[IRT]: https://github.com/larseggert/ietf-reviewtool