[Lsr] Benjamin Kaduk's No Objection on draft-ietf-lsr-isis-rfc7810bis-04: (with COMMENT)

[Benjamin Kaduk <[e-mail]>]

Benjamin Kaduk has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-lsr-isis-rfc7810bis-04: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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The nice tidy diff against RFC 7810 and description in Appendix A made this
document very easy to review; thank you!

That said, I think that there are some lingering factual errors that will
require some text changes; in particular, relating to the IANA
registrations.  E.g,. Section 2 shouldn't say "this document registers new
IS-IS TE sub-TLVs" and "this document registers several sub-TLVs", since
the sub-TLVs are not new.  Similarly, one could make a case that the IANA
considerations should request for IANA to update the registrations for the
indicated sub-TLVs to point to this document instead of RFC 7810.

(I'm still balloting No Objection and not Discuss, because I trust the
responsible AD to make the right thing happen.)