Re: [Manycouches] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-shmoo-cancel-meeting-05: (with COMMENT)

Martin Duke <martin.h.duke@gmail.com> Tue, 20 July 2021 20:53 UTC

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Date: Tue, 20 Jul 2021 13:53:02 -0700
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Subject: Re: [Manycouches] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-shmoo-cancel-meeting-05: (with COMMENT)
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Hi Murray,

"Facility" is now gone from the document, but I made a small addition in
this PR.
https://github.com/martinduke/draft-ietf-shmoo-cancel-meeting/pull/16

Thanks for the review.
Martin


On Wed, Jul 14, 2021 at 2:38 PM Murray Kucherawy via Datatracker <
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> Murray Kucherawy has entered the following ballot position for
> draft-ietf-shmoo-cancel-meeting-05: No Objection
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> I suggest the shepherd writeup should have been sent back for revision.  It
> answers the first three questions (What is the status, why is this the
> right
> status, is it shown on the front page?) with just "BCP".  Also, "N/A" is
> not an
> appropriate answer to question 7.
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> Given the capitalization in Section 3.1, it appears some terms were also
> imported from RFC 8718 (e.g., "Facility", which is formally defined
> there).  We
> might want to make it explicit that these definitions are imported.
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