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Re: [Manycouches] John Scudder's No Objection on draft-ietf-shmoo-cancel-meeting-05: (with COMMENT)

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From: John Scudder <jgs@juniper.net>
To: Martin Duke <martin.h.duke@gmail.com>
CC: The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>, "draft-ietf-shmoo-cancel-meeting@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-shmoo-cancel-meeting@ietf.org>, "shmoo-chairs@ietf.org" <shmoo-chairs@ietf.org>, "manycouches@ietf.org" <manycouches@ietf.org>, Amelia Andersdotter <amelia@centr.org>
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Subject: Re: [Manycouches] John Scudder's No Objection on draft-ietf-shmoo-cancel-meeting-05: (with COMMENT)
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> On Jul 13, 2021, at 4:47 PM, Martin Duke <martin.h.duke@gmail.com> wrote:
> 
> On Tue, Jul 13, 2021 at 1:26 PM John Scudder via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
> 3. I reviewed the Github Editor's copy (as of July 13 16:00 EDT or so) and
> noticed that the text "These remedies are listed in approximate declining order
> of preference" was added to the end of §4. That directly conflicts with version
> 5's "presented in no particular order". I like the text in v5 and don't
> particularly like the proposed edit.
> 
> So the principles are in no particular order and the remedies are in rough order. I don't feel
> strongly one way or the other as to whether this sentence stays in. IIUC this is the one thing
> that may still need attention having merged the PR.

Oh I see now. I was thrown off by the pronoun (“these remedies”) and proximity, which led me to read the comment as referring to the list of principles. I think this could be addressed by a small edit, as in s/These/The following/.

—John

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