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Re: [Manycouches] John Scudder's No Objection on draft-ietf-shmoo-cancel-meeting-05: (with COMMENT)

Martin Duke <martin.h.duke@gmail.com> Tue, 13 July 2021 20:56 UTC

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From: Martin Duke <martin.h.duke@gmail.com>
Date: Tue, 13 Jul 2021 13:56:04 -0700
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Subject: Re: [Manycouches] John Scudder's No Objection on draft-ietf-shmoo-cancel-meeting-05: (with COMMENT)
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Roger that,

https://github.com/martinduke/draft-ietf-shmoo-cancel-meeting/commit/3d5a71ca63051ac3ddf409db3aa0794d43d1eb0a


On Tue, Jul 13, 2021 at 1:53 PM John Scudder <jgs@juniper.net> wrote:

> > On Jul 13, 2021, at 4:47 PM, Martin Duke <martin.h.duke@gmail.com>
> wrote:
> >
> > On Tue, Jul 13, 2021 at 1:26 PM John Scudder via Datatracker <
> noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
> > 3. I reviewed the Github Editor's copy (as of July 13 16:00 EDT or so)
> and
> > noticed that the text "These remedies are listed in approximate
> declining order
> > of preference" was added to the end of §4. That directly conflicts with
> version
> > 5's "presented in no particular order". I like the text in v5 and don't
> > particularly like the proposed edit.
> >
> > So the principles are in no particular order and the remedies are in
> rough order. I don't feel
> > strongly one way or the other as to whether this sentence stays in. IIUC
> this is the one thing
> > that may still need attention having merged the PR.
>
> Oh I see now. I was thrown off by the pronoun (“these remedies”) and
> proximity, which led me to read the comment as referring to the list of
> principles. I think this could be addressed by a small edit, as in
> s/These/The following/.
>
> —John

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