RE: [Mavs] comments on the requirements document

"Martin Halstead" <mhalstead@nexagent.com> Thu, 13 October 2005 08:56 UTC

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Dimitri

Thanks for the excellent comments! I am going to work on the next version of this over the week, would like to clarify some of your points in the word document as I am doing that.

Regards

Martin

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From: mavs-bounces@ietf.org [mailto:mavs-bounces@ietf.org]On Behalf Of
dimitri papadimitriou
Sent: 09 October 2005 17:35
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Subject: [Mavs] comments on the requirements document


jim, all,

you will in the attached document comments, suggestions and input to the 
requirement document

in general, i think that the terms being introduced should be further 
refiend, and the text would be more concrete if a "high level" reference 
model would be introduced

also in order to ease reading it may be advisable to be more synthetic 
in terms of requirements by adding for instance at the end of each 
section a short paragraph recollecting the requirements, the text as 
part of each section should at the end just detail the rational and/or 
motivation for introducing this requirement in the context of the 
proposed reference model; the latter should help the reader to put these 
requirements in perspective

thanks,
- dimitri.

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