Re: [MMUSIC] [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-mmusic-dtls-sdp-22

Christer Holmberg <> Tue, 28 March 2017 14:40 UTC

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(3) Minor:

>>> I concur with the comments in the ops-dir review by Carlos Pignataro 
>>> regarding the formatting of section 9. He didn't suggest a fix. 
>>> Perhaps some special marker (e.g. "|" or "<" and ">") can be placed in every line to indicate it 
>>> is test from or for another document - either at the beginning or end of every line.
>> I have never seen that been used before - not in documents I have authored, or in documents written by others.
> Yes, I know. I was just trying to be constructive by suggesting *something*. My first thought was to indent. 
> But that would require reflowing all the text to avoid exceeding line length. That seemed like a bad idea.
> I'm not attached to this solution. I've complained about the same problem in other drafts, but nobody came
> up with a solution so they didn't get resolved. Here I'm not the only one who sees a problem, so maybe it is 
> worth trying to find a solution.

I don't have a problem to add e.g. "|", if that's what people want to do, but my preference would be to not do anything in this draft, at this point of time.