[MMUSIC] Barry Leiba's No Objection on draft-ietf-mmusic-data-channel-sdpneg-25: (with COMMENT)

[Barry Leiba via Datatracker <[e-mail]>]

Barry Leiba has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-mmusic-data-channel-sdpneg-25: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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I agree with Magnus’s DISCUSS.

Please use the full BCP 14 boilerplate from RFC 8174, rather than abridging it.

— Section 5.1.1 —

   Within an 'a=dcmap:' attribute line's 'dcmap-opt' value only one
   'maxretr-opt' parameter or one 'maxtime-opt' parameter MAY be
   present.  Both MUST NOT be present.

Lower case “may” here, please.  The MUST NOT is the normative bit.

— Section 9 subsections —

Instances of “IESG Chairs” should just say “IESG”.