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Re: [Modern] Review of draft-ietf-modern-problem-framework-00.txt

"Peterson, Jon" <jon.peterson@neustar.biz> Thu, 07 July 2016 17:33 UTC

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To: Steve Donovan <srdonovan@usdonovans.com>, "modern@ietf.org" <modern@ietf.org>
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Thanks Steve, I cleaned these up.

Jon Peterson
Neustar, Inc.

From: Modern <modern-bounces@ietf.org<mailto:modern-bounces@ietf.org>> on behalf of Steve Donovan <srdonovan@usdonovans.com<mailto:srdonovan@usdonovans.com>>
Date: Friday, June 24, 2016 at 12:21 PM
To: "modern@ietf.org<mailto:modern@ietf.org>" <modern@ietf.org<mailto:modern@ietf.org>>
Subject: [Modern] Review of draft-ietf-modern-problem-framework-00.txt

I have reviewed draft-ietf-modern-problem-framework-00.txt.  This document is in great shape and I only have editorial comments as follows.

Regards,

Steve

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Section 1:

s /familiar from the /familiar to the/
s/ manenr/manner/
s/evolvling/evolving/

Section 2.1
s/assginees/assignees/
s/entitiy/entity/

Section 3
Need references for DRINKS and WEIRDS

Section 4.1.4
s/Aquiring/Acquiring/

Section 4.1.5
s/wtih/with/

Section 4.2.1.2
s/Regisrar/Registrar/

Section 4.1.2.3
s/could could/could/

Section 4.3.2
s/to access to this/to access this/

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