Re: [Modern] Review of draft-ietf-modern-problem-framework-00.txt

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From: "Gorman, Pierce A [CTO]" <Pierce.Gorman@sprint.com>
To: "Peterson, Jon" <jon.peterson@neustar.biz>, Steve Donovan <srdonovan@usdonovans.com>, "modern@ietf.org" <modern@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [Modern] Review of draft-ietf-modern-problem-framework-00.txt
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I haven't read the most current version, but I think it's fair to say I've provided most of the public non-political feedback to MODERN so far.

The last comments I made advocated for the use of .name. domain name space (or a new name space) tied to telephone numbers with the concept of MODERN hosting Communications Reachability Information (CRI) and that index keys into a CRI database could be passwords which could also be telephone numbers.

The idea was cheerfully disregarded but I will bring it up again.  The MODERN "problem statement" is a solution architecture (not a problem statement), and it's inadequate, and centric to NANP telephony considerations.

If you want a globally usable telephone number routing information model for IP-based telecommunications and you want to more usefully solve problems like calling identity authentication (globally) and non-geographic number portability (for NANP), you should seriously be looking at multi-factor authentication for routing information queries.  Factors such as who do you think you're calling? And, what is the number [password] you think is associated with them?

You send a query to the CRI and you only know one factor (e.g., telephone number)?  That provides you an index into the least useful telecommunications information.  Perhaps only a telephone number into a SPAM-only voicemail box or voice-to-text-to-SPAM-text-box or whatever the user has defined that protects them from unauthorized and unauthenticated communications attempts.  Create a multi-factor communications model (which SIP and other communications protocols easily and commonly support) and you can have a meaninful impact on global robo-calling and robo-texting SPAM.

I have 3 main telephone numbers that are unique to me.  Very few people have all 3.  I compartmentalize my communications based on whether they are private, family, or business.  I could easily want or have more.  Many people do.  Very few people purposefully distribute all of their telephone numbers, e-mail addresses, social network personas, et cetera to all of their private, family, and work contacts.

If you want to give users globally, the world over, control over CRI, build a model that addresses their communications reachability needs, not their voice telephony needs.

Regards,

Pierce

From: Modern [mailto:modern-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Peterson, Jon
Sent: July 07, 2016 12:33 PM
To: Steve Donovan <srdonovan@usdonovans.com>; modern@ietf.org
Subject: Re: [Modern] Review of draft-ietf-modern-problem-framework-00.txt


Thanks Steve, I cleaned these up.

Jon Peterson
Neustar, Inc.

From: Modern <modern-bounces@ietf.org<mailto:modern-bounces@ietf.org>> on behalf of Steve Donovan <srdonovan@usdonovans.com<mailto:srdonovan@usdonovans.com>>
Date: Friday, June 24, 2016 at 12:21 PM
To: "modern@ietf.org<mailto:modern@ietf.org>" <modern@ietf.org<mailto:modern@ietf.org>>
Subject: [Modern] Review of draft-ietf-modern-problem-framework-00.txt

I have reviewed draft-ietf-modern-problem-framework-00.txt.  This document is in great shape and I only have editorial comments as follows.

Regards,

Steve

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Section 1:

s /familiar from the /familiar to the/
s/ manenr/manner/
s/evolvling/evolving/

Section 2.1
s/assginees/assignees/
s/entitiy/entity/

Section 3
Need references for DRINKS and WEIRDS

Section 4.1.4
s/Aquiring/Acquiring/

Section 4.1.5
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Section 4.2.1.2
s/Regisrar/Registrar/

Section 4.1.2.3
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Section 4.3.2
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