Re: [Mops] TreeDN Shepherd Review

Chris Lemmons <alficles@gmail.com> Thu, 07 March 2024 05:31 UTC

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From: Chris Lemmons <alficles@gmail.com>
Date: Wed, 06 Mar 2024 22:31:46 -0700
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Write-up submitted.

On Thu, Feb 22, 2024 at 8:06 AM Kyle Rose <krose@krose.org> wrote:
>
> Great, excellent!
>
> @Lenny: I think that boilerplate is something fine to leave to the RFC editor to remove.
>
> Kyle
>
> On Thu, Feb 22, 2024 at 10:05 AM Chris Lemmons <alficles@gmail.com> wrote:
>>
>> Most excellent! My turn, I'll update my writeup and get it officially filed.
>>
>> On Tue, Feb 20, 2024 at 5:27 PM Leonard Giuliano <lenny@juniper.net> wrote:
>> >
>> >
>> > @Chris- thanks for the pointers to the non-ASCII chars.  I tried another
>> > editor and hopefully got them.  And thanks again for the amazingly
>> > thorough review.
>> >
>> > @Kyle- I left the boilerplate in there for now bc a draft just feels naked
>> > without it.  Otherwise, I cleaned up the rest of the doc and think it's
>> > ready for submission.  Here's a diff of the recent changes:
>> >
>> > https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url1=draft-ietf-mops-treedn-02&url2=draft-ietf-mops-treedn-03&difftype=--html
>> >
>> >
>> >
>> > On Tue, 20 Feb 2024, Kyle Rose wrote:
>> >
>> > |
>> > |
>> > | On Fri, Feb 16, 2024 at 2:48?AM Chris Lemmons <alficles@gmail.com> wrote:
>> > |
>> > |       @kyle: I wasn't entirely certain whether I should add my full writeup
>> > |       to the datatracker before or after giving the authors a chance to make
>> > |       the minor updates. It felt weird to add it with the nits when I
>> > |       suspected the authors would want to fix at least some subset of them
>> > |       before sending it for additional review. Let me know what works best
>> > |       for streamlining things.
>> > |
>> > |
>> > | I don't have a strong opinion either way. I'm happy to let the authors choose what to resolve now vs. later. Once you and the authors are both happy with the report, submit it and I'll get
>> > | the ball rolling on publication.
>> > |
>> > | Thanks,
>> > | Kyle
>> > |
>> > |
>> > |