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Re: [Mops] TreeDN Shepherd Review

Leonard Giuliano <lenny@juniper.net> Wed, 21 February 2024 00:27 UTC

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Date: Tue, 20 Feb 2024 16:27:14 -0800
From: Leonard Giuliano <lenny@juniper.net>
To: Kyle Rose <krose@krose.org>
CC: Chris Lemmons <alficles@gmail.com>, draft-ietf-mops-treedn.authors@ietf.org, mops@ietf.org, Leslie Daigle <ldaigle@thinkingcat.com>, "Lenart, Christopher (Chris)" <chris.lenart@verizon.com>, Rich Adam <richard.adam@geant.org>
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@Chris- thanks for the pointers to the non-ASCII chars.  I tried another 
editor and hopefully got them.  And thanks again for the amazingly 
thorough review.

@Kyle- I left the boilerplate in there for now bc a draft just feels naked 
without it.  Otherwise, I cleaned up the rest of the doc and think it's 
ready for submission.  Here's a diff of the recent changes:

https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url1=draft-ietf-mops-treedn-02&url2=draft-ietf-mops-treedn-03&difftype=--html



On Tue, 20 Feb 2024, Kyle Rose wrote:

| 
| 
| On Fri, Feb 16, 2024 at 2:48?AM Chris Lemmons <alficles@gmail.com> wrote:
| 
|       @kyle: I wasn't entirely certain whether I should add my full writeup
|       to the datatracker before or after giving the authors a chance to make
|       the minor updates. It felt weird to add it with the nits when I
|       suspected the authors would want to fix at least some subset of them
|       before sending it for additional review. Let me know what works best
|       for streamlining things.
| 
| 
| I don't have a strong opinion either way. I'm happy to let the authors choose what to resolve now vs. later. Once you and the authors are both happy with the report, submit it and I'll get
| the ball rolling on publication.
| 
| Thanks,
| Kyle
| 
| 
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