RE: [mpls] working group last call fordraft-ietf-mpls-number-0-bw-te-lsps

Hi all,

Some comments and questions on the draft. 

Best regards,
Attila

Section 1,
-remove the full stops after the expansion of acronyms

Section 2,
-paragraph 1: remove the explanation "(TE LSP signaled with zero
bandwidth)"

-paragraph 2: the text is unclear on what is referred by "such metrics"
in the last sentence. To clarify remove the parenthesis from "(other
metric...)" and change "other metric..." => "on metrics, e.g.,
percentage of reserved bandwidth or the number of hops." Maybe the last
sentence should simply state something like: "Unfortunately, in the
presence of unconstrained TE LSPs constraints on reserved bandwidth and
number of LSPs may be misleading and may lead to poorly load balanced
traffic."

-paragraph 5 ("Note that...") and 7 ("Furthermore, the...") should be
moved after paragraph 3

-paragraph 6: ("TE LSPs signaled..."): why do you exclude provisioned
LSPs? I can understand that there are cases where the information on
management plane provisioned LSPs is not needed/available, however I
think the proposed extensions should be more general and allow
collecting information on all the unconstrained LSPs in the TED.
Wouldn't it be possible to have two fields to include both the number of
unconstrained signaled and provisioned LSPs in the new TLV?

Section 3,
-maybe a figure would be appropriate showing the new TLV format.

Section 4,
-change ISIS to IS-IS 

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> Subject: [mpls] working group last call 
> fordraft-ietf-mpls-number-0-bw-te-lsps 
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> Working Group,
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> this is to initiate a two week working group last call om 
> draft-ietf-mpls-number-0-bw-te-lsps-06.txt.
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> The working group last call ends eob Oct 8.
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