[mpls] Additional comment on draft-ietf-mpls-tp-psc-tu

Loa Andersson <loa@pi.nu> Sat, 21 December 2013 10:55 UTC

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Subject: [mpls] Additional comment on draft-ietf-mpls-tp-psc-tu
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Working Group and Editors,

Over the last two weeks I've had the opportunity to discuss
draft-ietf-mpls-tp-psc-itu with people with different background.
The reaction is mainly very positive :).

However, there is one feedback that I get consistently, there is
a rather high threshold when starting to read the document. Even though
we taken steps to point out that the specification heveily depends on
RFC 6378, I thin we should make this explicit.

I propose that the add a sentence early in the inroduction, something
like "The reader of this document is assumed to be familiar with
RFC 6378.

/Loa
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Loa Andersson                        email: loa@mail01.huawei.com
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