IETF Logo Mail Archive

Re: [mpls] I-D Action: draft-ietf-mpls-inband-pm-encapsulation-11.txt

Tianran Zhou <zhoutianran@huawei.com> Thu, 11 April 2024 09:43 UTC

Return-Path: <zhoutianran@huawei.com>
X-Original-To: mpls@ietfa.amsl.com
Delivered-To: mpls@ietfa.amsl.com
Received: from localhost (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id EACE5C14F681; Thu, 11 Apr 2024 02:43:49 -0700 (PDT)
X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com
X-Spam-Flag: NO
X-Spam-Score: -6.895
X-Spam-Level:
X-Spam-Status: No, score=-6.895 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, RCVD_IN_DNSWL_HI=-5, RCVD_IN_MSPIKE_H3=0.001, RCVD_IN_MSPIKE_WL=0.001, RCVD_IN_ZEN_BLOCKED_OPENDNS=0.001, SPF_HELO_NONE=0.001, SPF_PASS=-0.001, URIBL_DBL_BLOCKED_OPENDNS=0.001, URIBL_ZEN_BLOCKED_OPENDNS=0.001] autolearn=ham autolearn_force=no
Received: from mail.ietf.org ([50.223.129.194]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id yluBBYy8mURX; Thu, 11 Apr 2024 02:43:45 -0700 (PDT)
Received: from frasgout.his.huawei.com (frasgout.his.huawei.com [185.176.79.56]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher AECDH-AES256-SHA (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 76271C14F682; Thu, 11 Apr 2024 02:43:45 -0700 (PDT)
Received: from mail.maildlp.com (unknown [172.18.186.31]) by frasgout.his.huawei.com (SkyGuard) with ESMTP id 4VFZV205RXz6K653; Thu, 11 Apr 2024 17:42:02 +0800 (CST)
Received: from lhrpeml500005.china.huawei.com (unknown [7.191.163.240]) by mail.maildlp.com (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 88B6C1404F4; Thu, 11 Apr 2024 17:43:42 +0800 (CST)
Received: from dggpemm100006.china.huawei.com (7.185.36.196) by lhrpeml500005.china.huawei.com (7.191.163.240) with Microsoft SMTP Server (version=TLS1_2, cipher=TLS_ECDHE_RSA_WITH_AES_256_GCM_SHA384) id 15.1.2507.35; Thu, 11 Apr 2024 10:43:41 +0100
Received: from kwepemf100007.china.huawei.com (7.202.181.221) by dggpemm100006.china.huawei.com (7.185.36.196) with Microsoft SMTP Server (version=TLS1_2, cipher=TLS_ECDHE_RSA_WITH_AES_256_GCM_SHA384) id 15.1.2507.35; Thu, 11 Apr 2024 17:43:39 +0800
Received: from kwepemf100007.china.huawei.com ([7.202.181.221]) by kwepemf100007.china.huawei.com ([7.202.181.221]) with mapi id 15.02.1544.004; Thu, 11 Apr 2024 17:43:38 +0800
From: Tianran Zhou <zhoutianran@huawei.com>
To: "mpls@ietf.org" <mpls@ietf.org>, "i-d-announce@ietf.org" <i-d-announce@ietf.org>
CC: "Zhukeyi(Kaiyin,Datacom Standard&Patent)" <zhukeyi@huawei.com>
Thread-Topic: [mpls] I-D Action: draft-ietf-mpls-inband-pm-encapsulation-11.txt
Thread-Index: AdqL7ucD4GAWSt4e6EmHBBJ4cCmRVg==
Date: Thu, 11 Apr 2024 09:43:38 +0000
Message-ID: <18b23e793f4946dab992300e1523ff95@huawei.com>
Accept-Language: zh-CN, en-US
Content-Language: zh-CN
X-MS-Has-Attach:
X-MS-TNEF-Correlator:
x-originating-ip: [10.81.221.61]
Content-Type: text/plain; charset="gb2312"
Content-Transfer-Encoding: base64
MIME-Version: 1.0
Archived-At: <https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/mpls/pDK8BuViGGmmVRF3pxcRVmbACXs>
Subject: Re: [mpls] I-D Action: draft-ietf-mpls-inband-pm-encapsulation-11.txt
X-BeenThere: mpls@ietf.org
X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.39
Precedence: list
List-Id: Multi-Protocol Label Switching WG <mpls.ietf.org>
List-Unsubscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/options/mpls>, <mailto:mpls-request@ietf.org?subject=unsubscribe>
List-Archive: <https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/browse/mpls/>
List-Post: <mailto:mpls@ietf.org>
List-Help: <mailto:mpls-request@ietf.org?subject=help>
List-Subscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/mpls>, <mailto:mpls-request@ietf.org?subject=subscribe>
X-List-Received-Date: Thu, 11 Apr 2024 09:43:50 -0000

Hi,

I find some texts are not clear.
1. In the introduction, paragraph 3 and 4, the use of "former" and "later" are difficult to understand. You may change another way to say.
2. In section 3, you only mentions "If the edge-to-edge measurement is applied". What about the else? It sounds like, all the following text is about the edge-to-edge. Maybe, you can add something like 
"Otherwise, if the T bit is 0, both transit node and egress node are the processing nodes."

Best,
Tianran
-----邮件原件-----
发件人: mpls <mpls-bounces@ietf.org> 代表 internet-drafts@ietf.org
发送时间: 2024年4月10日 9:22
收件人: i-d-announce@ietf.org
抄送: mpls@ietf.org
主题: [mpls] I-D Action: draft-ietf-mpls-inband-pm-encapsulation-11.txt

Internet-Draft draft-ietf-mpls-inband-pm-encapsulation-11.txt is now available. It is a work item of the Multiprotocol Label Switching (MPLS) WG of the IETF.

   Title:   Encapsulation For MPLS Performance Measurement with Alternate Marking Method
   Authors: Weiqiang Cheng
            Xiao Min
            Tianran Zhou
            Jinyou Dai
            Yoav Peleg
   Name:    draft-ietf-mpls-inband-pm-encapsulation-11.txt
   Pages:   17
   Dates:   2024-04-09

Abstract:

   This document defines the encapsulation for MPLS performance
   measurement with alternate marking method, which performs flow-based
   packet loss, delay, and jitter measurements on MPLS live traffic.

The IETF datatracker status page for this Internet-Draft is:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-mpls-inband-pm-encapsulation/

There is also an HTMLized version available at:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-mpls-inband-pm-encapsulation-11

A diff from the previous version is available at:
https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url2=draft-ietf-mpls-inband-pm-encapsulation-11

Internet-Drafts are also available by rsync at:
rsync.ietf.org::internet-drafts


_______________________________________________
mpls mailing list
mpls@ietf.org
https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/mpls

v2.23.0 | Report a Bug | By Email