[Mtgvenue] Ben Campbell's Yes on draft-ietf-mtgvenue-iaoc-venue-selection-process-15: (with COMMENT)
Ben Campbell <ben@nostrum.com> Wed, 06 June 2018 19:00 UTC
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Subject: [Mtgvenue] Ben Campbell's Yes on draft-ietf-mtgvenue-iaoc-venue-selection-process-15: (with COMMENT)
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Ben Campbell has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-mtgvenue-iaoc-venue-selection-process-15: Yes When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-mtgvenue-iaoc-venue-selection-process/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- Thanks for this. Most of my comments are already covered, but here's a few: Substantive: §3.2.3 and §3.3: The first section says that the cost of "open and unfiltered internet" in public spaces and guest rooms in "typically" included in the room price. But the latter simply says they are included. Is that the intenti? It seems odd for the overflow hotels to be held to a higher standard than the meeting hotel. Editorial and Nits: §1, 2nd paragraph: " the IASA to apply their " - Plural disagreement. (It looks like a mix of the US English tendency to treat organizations as singular entities and the British English tendency to treat them as plural collectives ). §7: The last sentence seems disconnected from the rest of the paragraph; I suggest a separate paragraph.
- [Mtgvenue] Ben Campbell's Yes on draft-ietf-mtgve… Ben Campbell
- Re: [Mtgvenue] Ben Campbell's Yes on draft-ietf-m… Pete Resnick
- Re: [Mtgvenue] Ben Campbell's Yes on draft-ietf-m… Ben Campbell