[Mtgvenue] Ben Campbell's Yes on draft-ietf-mtgvenue-iaoc-venue-selection-process-15: (with COMMENT)

Ben Campbell <ben@nostrum.com> Wed, 06 June 2018 19:00 UTC

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Thanks for this. Most of my comments are already covered, but here's a few:

Substantive:

§3.2.3 and §3.3: The first section says that the cost of "open and unfiltered
internet" in public spaces and guest rooms in "typically" included in the room
price. But the latter simply says they are included.  Is that the intenti? It
seems odd for the overflow hotels to be held to a higher standard than the
meeting hotel.

Editorial and Nits:

§1, 2nd paragraph: " the IASA to apply their " - Plural disagreement. (It looks
like a mix of the US English tendency to treat organizations as singular
entities and the British English tendency to treat them as plural collectives ).

§7: The last sentence seems disconnected from the rest of the paragraph; I
suggest a separate paragraph.