Re: [netconf] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8650 (6369)

"Rob Wilton (rwilton)" <rwilton@cisco.com> Fri, 12 January 2024 14:16 UTC

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From: "Rob Wilton (rwilton)" <rwilton@cisco.com>
To: RFC Errata System <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org>, "Eric Voit (evoit)" <evoit@cisco.com>, "Reshad Rahman (rrahman)" <rrahman@cisco.com>, "Einar Nilsen-Nygaard (einarnn)" <einarnn@cisco.com>, "ludwig@clemm.org" <ludwig@clemm.org>, "andy@yumaworks.com" <andy@yumaworks.com>, "warren@kumari.net" <warren@kumari.net>, "kent+ietf@watsen.net" <kent+ietf@watsen.net>, "mjethanandani@gmail.com" <mjethanandani@gmail.com>
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Hi Authors, Netconf WG,

As I try and get through some of the errata backlog, I would like your input on this one.

I don't think that the RFC is technically wrong here (since the server can choose to use whatever URI they wish), I think that verifying this errata would probably be most helpful.  Otherwise, I will probably move it to "Hold for Document Update".  Any opinions?

Regards,
Rob


> -----Original Message-----
> From: RFC Errata System <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org>
> Sent: Thursday, December 24, 2020 7:52 PM
> To: Eric Voit (evoit) <evoit@cisco.com>; Reshad Rahman (rrahman)
> <rrahman@cisco.com>; Einar Nilsen-Nygaard (einarnn)
> <einarnn@cisco.com>; ludwig@clemm.org; andy@yumaworks.com;
> warren@kumari.net; Rob Wilton (rwilton) <rwilton@cisco.com>;
> kent+ietf@watsen.net; mjethanandani@gmail.com
> Cc: muly_i@rad.com; netconf@ietf.org; rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org
> Subject: [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8650 (6369)
> 
> The following errata report has been submitted for RFC8650,
> "Dynamic Subscription to YANG Events and Datastores over RESTCONF".
> 
> --------------------------------------
> You may review the report below and at:
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid6369
> 
> --------------------------------------
> Type: Editorial
> Reported by: Muly Ilan <muly_i@rad.com>
> 
> Section: A.2.1
> 
> Original Text
> -------------
> A.2.1.  "subscription-modified"
> 
>    A "subscription-modified" encoded in JSON would look like:
> 
>    {
>      "ietf-restconf:notification" : {
>        "eventTime": "2007-09-01T10:00:00Z",
>        "ietf-subscribed-notifications:subscription-modified": {
>          "id": 39,
>          "uri": "https://example.com/restconf/subscriptions/22"
>          "stream-xpath-filter": "/example-module:foo",
>          "stream": {
>             "ietf-netconf-subscribed-notifications" : "NETCONF"
>          }
>        }
>      }
>    }
> 
> Corrected Text
> --------------
> A.2.1.  "subscription-modified"
> 
>    A "subscription-modified" encoded in JSON would look like:
> 
>    {
>      "ietf-restconf:notification" : {
>        "eventTime": "2007-09-01T10:00:00Z",
>        "ietf-subscribed-notifications:subscription-modified": {
>          "id": 39,
>          "uri": "https://example.com/restconf/subscriptions/39"
>          "stream-xpath-filter": "/example-module:foo",
>          "stream": {
>             "ietf-netconf-subscribed-notifications" : "NETCONF"
>          }
>        }
>      }
>    }
> 
> Notes
> -----
> Change the URI to match the ID.
> 
> Instructions:
> -------------
> This erratum is currently posted as "Reported". If necessary, please
> use "Reply All" to discuss whether it should be verified or
> rejected. When a decision is reached, the verifying party
> can log in to change the status and edit the report, if necessary.
> 
> --------------------------------------
> RFC8650 (draft-ietf-netconf-restconf-notif-15)
> --------------------------------------
> Title               : Dynamic Subscription to YANG Events and Datastores over
> RESTCONF
> Publication Date    : November 2019
> Author(s)           : E. Voit, R. Rahman, E. Nilsen-Nygaard, A. Clemm, A. Bierman
> Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
> Source              : Network Configuration
> Area                : Operations and Management
> Stream              : IETF
> Verifying Party     : IESG