Re: [netconf] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8650 (6379)

"Rob Wilton (rwilton)" <rwilton@cisco.com> Tue, 05 January 2021 10:06 UTC

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From: "Rob Wilton (rwilton)" <rwilton@cisco.com>
To: Alexander Clemm <alex@futurewei.com>, Reshad Rahman <reshad@yahoo.com>, RFC Errata System <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org>, "Einar Nilsen-Nygaard (einarnn)" <einarnn@cisco.com>, "ludwig@clemm.org" <ludwig@clemm.org>, "andy@yumaworks.com" <andy@yumaworks.com>, "warren@kumari.net" <warren@kumari.net>, "kent+ietf@watsen.net" <kent+ietf@watsen.net>, "mjethanandani@gmail.com" <mjethanandani@gmail.com>, "Eric Voit (evoit)" <evoit@cisco.com>
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Thanks all for confirming.  I have verified this errata.

Regards,
Rob


From: Alexander Clemm <alex@futurewei.com>
Sent: 04 January 2021 19:03
To: Reshad Rahman <reshad@yahoo.com>; RFC Errata System <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org>; Einar Nilsen-Nygaard (einarnn) <einarnn@cisco.com>; ludwig@clemm.org; andy@yumaworks.com; warren@kumari.net; Rob Wilton (rwilton) <rwilton@cisco.com>; kent+ietf@watsen.net; mjethanandani@gmail.com; Eric Voit (evoit) <evoit@cisco.com>
Cc: netconf@ietf.org
Subject: RE: [netconf] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8650 (6379)

+1
--- Alex

From: netconf <netconf-bounces@ietf.org<mailto:netconf-bounces@ietf.org>> On Behalf Of Reshad Rahman
Sent: Monday, January 4, 2021 7:05 AM
To: RFC Errata System <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org<mailto:rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org>>; Einar Nilsen-Nygaard (einarnn) <einarnn@cisco.com<mailto:einarnn@cisco.com>>; ludwig@clemm.org<mailto:ludwig@clemm.org>; andy@yumaworks.com<mailto:andy@yumaworks.com>; warren@kumari.net<mailto:warren@kumari.net>; Rob Wilton (rwilton) <rwilton@cisco.com<mailto:rwilton@cisco.com>>; kent+ietf@watsen.net<mailto:kent+ietf@watsen.net>; mjethanandani@gmail.com<mailto:mjethanandani@gmail.com>; Eric Voit (evoit) <evoit@cisco.com<mailto:evoit@cisco.com>>
Cc: netconf@ietf.org<mailto:netconf@ietf.org>
Subject: Re: [netconf] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8650 (6379)

I agree.

On Monday, January 4, 2021, 10:02:17 AM EST, Eric Voit (evoit) <evoit@cisco.com<mailto:evoit@cisco.com>> wrote:


Adding Reshad's new email.  I think this should be accepted.

Eric


> The following errata report has been submitted for RFC8650, "Dynamic
> Subscription to YANG Events and Datastores over RESTCONF".
>
> --------------------------------------
> You may review the report below and at:
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid6379<https://nam11.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.rfc-editor.org%2Ferrata%2Feid6379&data=04%7C01%7Calex%40futurewei.com%7C345b0c3c7e0e4ccf086c08d8b0c239a8%7C0fee8ff2a3b240189c753a1d5591fedc%7C1%7C0%7C637453695550258969%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C1000&sdata=sWTYuRsbL%2BOWiCtgBKsXcyhWUNoahYvGGKrBky93y3I%3D&reserved=0>
>
> --------------------------------------
> Type: Editorial
> Reported by: Muly Ilan <muly_i@rad.com<mailto:muly_i@rad.com>>
>
> Section: A.1.1
>
> Original Text
> -------------
>    Upon receipt of the successful response, the subscriber does a GET to
>    the provided URI to start the flow of notification messages.  When
>    the publisher receives this, the subscription is moved to the active
>    state (c).
>
>    GET /restconf/subscriptions/22
>
>              Figure 5: "establish-subscription" Subsequent POST
>
> Corrected Text
> --------------
>    Upon receipt of the successful response, the subscriber does a GET to
>    the provided URI to start the flow of notification messages.  When
>    the publisher receives this, the subscription is moved to the active
>    state (c).
>
>    GET /restconf/subscriptions/22
>
>              Figure 5: "establish-subscription" Subsequent GET
>
> Notes
> -----
> Substitute POST by GET in the figure caption
>
> Instructions:
> -------------
> This erratum is currently posted as "Reported". If necessary, please use
> "Reply
> All" to discuss whether it should be verified or rejected. When a decision
> is
> reached, the verifying party can log in to change the status and edit the
> report, if
> necessary.
>
> --------------------------------------
> RFC8650 (draft-ietf-netconf-restconf-notif-15)
> --------------------------------------
> Title              : Dynamic Subscription to YANG Events and Datastores
> over
> RESTCONF
> Publication Date    : November 2019
> Author(s)          : E. Voit, R. Rahman, E. Nilsen-Nygaard, A. Clemm, A.
> Bierman
> Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
> Source              : Network Configuration
> Area                : Operations and Management
> Stream              : IETF
> Verifying Party    : IESG