Re: [nfsv4] I-D Action: draft-ietf-nfsv4-mv0-trunking-update-04.txt

Spencer Dawkins at IETF <spencerdawkins.ietf@gmail.com> Fri, 01 February 2019 21:08 UTC

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From: Spencer Dawkins at IETF <spencerdawkins.ietf@gmail.com>
Date: Fri, 01 Feb 2019 15:08:38 -0600
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To: Chuck Lever <chuck.lever@oracle.com>
Cc: Benjamin Kaduk <kaduk@mit.edu>, draft-ietf-nfsv4-mv0-trunking-update@ietf.org, Ben Campbell <ben@nostrum.com>, nfsv4-chairs@ietf.org, NFSv4 <nfsv4@ietf.org>, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [nfsv4] I-D Action: draft-ietf-nfsv4-mv0-trunking-update-04.txt
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Hi, Chuck,

On Fri, Feb 1, 2019 at 11:09 AM Chuck Lever <chuck.lever@oracle.com> wrote:

>
>
> > On Feb 1, 2019, at 12:05 PM, Benjamin Kaduk <kaduk@mit.edu> wrote:
> >
> > On Fri, Feb 01, 2019 at 09:44:11AM -0500, Chuck Lever wrote:
> >>
> >>
> >> Revision -04 attempts to address the outstanding DISCUSS and COMMENT
> >> ballot positions. An XML comment requests RFC Editor attention to the
> >
> > It does so [*], and I've cleared in the datatracker.
> >
> >> concern about "this document" v. "the current document".
> >
> > Excellent; thank you.
> >
> > -Benjamin
> >
> >
> > [*] I think Section 5.2.3 was going to go with "need to support multiple
> > connection types" as well as the other changes made.
>
> This sentence?
>
>    Because of the need to support multiple connections, clients face the
>    issue of determining the proper connection type to use when
>    establishing a connection to a server network address.
>
> I think you are correct, sorry for the oversight. I can either submit
> another revision with this change or communicate the change to the RFC
> Editor during AUTH48.
>

It would be fine with me if you could submit that revision. That's more
reliable than remembering a change to be made in AUTH48, especially with
your AD switching out in the middle of the process.

Thanks!

Spencer