Re: [nfsv4] I-D Action: draft-ietf-nfsv4-mv0-trunking-update-04.txt

Chuck Lever <chuck.lever@oracle.com> Fri, 01 February 2019 21:19 UTC

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Date: Fri, 01 Feb 2019 16:18:56 -0500
Cc: Benjamin Kaduk <kaduk@mit.edu>, draft-ietf-nfsv4-mv0-trunking-update@ietf.org, Ben Campbell <ben@nostrum.com>, nfsv4-chairs@ietf.org, NFSv4 <nfsv4@ietf.org>, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [nfsv4] I-D Action: draft-ietf-nfsv4-mv0-trunking-update-04.txt
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Hi Spencer (D) -

> On Feb 1, 2019, at 4:08 PM, Spencer Dawkins at IETF <spencerdawkins.ietf@gmail.com> wrote:
> 
> Hi, Chuck, 
> 
>> On Fri, Feb 1, 2019 at 11:09 AM Chuck Lever <chuck.lever@oracle.com> wrote:
>> 
>> 
>> > On Feb 1, 2019, at 12:05 PM, Benjamin Kaduk <kaduk@mit.edu> wrote:
>> > 
>> > On Fri, Feb 01, 2019 at 09:44:11AM -0500, Chuck Lever wrote:
>> >> 
>> >> 
>> >> Revision -04 attempts to address the outstanding DISCUSS and COMMENT
>> >> ballot positions. An XML comment requests RFC Editor attention to the
>> > 
>> > It does so [*], and I've cleared in the datatracker.
>> > 
>> >> concern about "this document" v. "the current document".
>> > 
>> > Excellent; thank you.
>> > 
>> > -Benjamin
>> > 
>> > 
>> > [*] I think Section 5.2.3 was going to go with "need to support multiple
>> > connection types" as well as the other changes made.
>> 
>> This sentence?
>> 
>>    Because of the need to support multiple connections, clients face the
>>    issue of determining the proper connection type to use when
>>    establishing a connection to a server network address.
>> 
>> I think you are correct, sorry for the oversight. I can either submit
>> another revision with this change or communicate the change to the RFC
>> Editor during AUTH48.
> 
> It would be fine with me if you could submit that revision. That's more reliable than remembering a change to be made in AUTH48, especially with your AD switching out in the middle of the process.

Done.


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Chuck Lever