[nfsv4] Alexey Melnikov's No Objection on draft-ietf-nfsv4-multi-domain-fs-reqs-09: (with COMMENT)

"Alexey Melnikov" <aamelnikov@fastmail.fm> Mon, 29 August 2016 15:36 UTC

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Subject: [nfsv4] Alexey Melnikov's No Objection on draft-ietf-nfsv4-multi-domain-fs-reqs-09: (with COMMENT)

Alexey Melnikov has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-nfsv4-multi-domain-fs-reqs-09: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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I think using more examples in the document would improve readability.

A couple of very small nits with this document:

"mulit-domain" typo at least 4 times.

LDAP reference should probably be listed on first mention. Similar for
Kerberos.

[nfsv4] Alexey Melnikov's No Objection on draft-i… Alexey Melnikov
Re: [nfsv4] Alexey Melnikov's No Objection on dra… Adamson, Andy