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Re: [nfsv4] Alexey Melnikov's No Objection on draft-ietf-nfsv4-multi-domain-fs-reqs-09: (with COMMENT)

"Adamson, Andy" <William.Adamson@netapp.com> Mon, 29 August 2016 19:53 UTC

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From: "Adamson, Andy" <William.Adamson@netapp.com>
To: Alexey Melnikov <aamelnikov@fastmail.fm>
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Subject: Re: [nfsv4] Alexey Melnikov's No Objection on draft-ietf-nfsv4-multi-domain-fs-reqs-09: (with COMMENT)
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> On Aug 29, 2016, at 11:36 AM, Alexey Melnikov <aamelnikov@fastmail.fm> wrote:
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> Alexey Melnikov has entered the following ballot position for
> draft-ietf-nfsv4-multi-domain-fs-reqs-09: No Objection
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> COMMENT:
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Hi Alexey

Thank you for the review.
> 
> I think using more examples in the document would improve readability.

I’ve added clarifying text to the examples section
> 
> A couple of very small nits with this document:
> 
> "mulit-domain" typo at least 4 times.

Fixed.
> 
> LDAP reference should probably be listed on first mention. Similar for
> Kerberos.

Fixed

Thanks

—>Andy
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