[nfsv4] Kathleen Moriarty's No Objection on draft-ietf-nfsv4-multi-domain-fs-reqs-09: (with COMMENT)

["Kathleen Moriarty" <[e-mail]>]

Kathleen Moriarty has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-nfsv4-multi-domain-fs-reqs-09: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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Thanks for following the advice in the SecDir review:
https://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/secdir/current/msg06652.html

I think the draft could be a bit more clear, following Russ' comments a
bit further.  I had similar questions in this version, but then read his
review and the responses.  I'll leave this as a comment for the AD since
my comments would be similar to those already made.  If the draft could
read a bit better, that would be helpful.