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Re: [nfsv4] Kathleen Moriarty's No Objection on draft-ietf-nfsv4-multi-domain-fs-reqs-09: (with COMMENT)

"Adamson, Andy" <William.Adamson@netapp.com> Mon, 29 August 2016 23:05 UTC

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From: "Adamson, Andy" <William.Adamson@netapp.com>
To: Kathleen Moriarty <kathleen.moriarty.ietf@gmail.com>
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Subject: Re: [nfsv4] Kathleen Moriarty's No Objection on draft-ietf-nfsv4-multi-domain-fs-reqs-09: (with COMMENT)
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> On Aug 29, 2016, at 4:22 PM, Kathleen Moriarty <kathleen.moriarty.ietf@gmail.com> wrote:
> 
> On Mon, Aug 29, 2016 at 3:53 PM, Adamson, Andy
> <William.Adamson@netapp.com> wrote:
>> 
>>> On Aug 29, 2016, at 11:55 AM, Kathleen Moriarty <Kathleen.Moriarty.ietf@gmail.com> wrote:
>>> 
>>> Kathleen Moriarty has entered the following ballot position for
>>> draft-ietf-nfsv4-multi-domain-fs-reqs-09: No Objection
>>> 
>>> When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all
>>> email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this
>>> introductory paragraph, however.)
>>> 
>>> 
>>> Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html
>>> for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions.
>>> 
>>> 
>>> The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here:
>>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-nfsv4-multi-domain-fs-reqs/
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 
>>> ----------------------------------------------------------------------
>>> COMMENT:
>>> ----------------------------------------------------------------------
>>> 
>>> Thanks for following the advice in the SecDir review:
>>> https://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/secdir/current/msg06652.html
>>> 
>>> I think the draft could be a bit more clear, following Russ' comments a
>>> bit further.  I had similar questions in this version, but then read his
>>> review and the responses.  I'll leave this as a comment for the AD since
>>> my comments would be similar to those already made.  If the draft could
>>> read a bit better, that would be helpful.

Hi

I just posted draft-ietf-nfsv4-multi-domain-fs-reqs-10

—>Andy
>> 
>> Hi Kathleen
>> 
>> Thank you for the review. I’ve responded to Russ and added clarifying text that I hope resolves your comments.
> 
> Hi Andy,
> 
> Is that text in the current version?  If so, additional clarifying
> text would be helpful.  His review helped in my understanding of the
> draft.  It made it possible for me to review the draft in a shorter
> amount of time, but actually reading the draft and having the points
> Russ raised explained better would be helpful.  If it's not in the
> current version,where can I find the updated text?
> 
> Thanks,
> Kathleen
>> 
>> —>Andy
>>> 
>>> 
>> 
> 
> 
> 
> -- 
> 
> Best regards,
> Kathleen

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