Re: [NSIS] AD evaluation of draft-ietf-nsis-ntlp-statemechine-08
Xiaoming Fu <fu@cs.uni-goettingen.de> Tue, 26 January 2010 15:53 UTC
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Subject: Re: [NSIS] AD evaluation of draft-ietf-nsis-ntlp-statemechine-08
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Hi Magnus, Thanks for your review. We would address your comments shortly. Xiaoming Magnus Westerlund wrote: > Hi, > > I have reviewed the GIST state machine document and have the following > comment: > > Can't the text version be imporved in relation to the state diagram? > Couldn't the state and the transitions be included in a figure with only > the note numbers on the transitions. Then include the tables below them, > at least making the text version somewhat usable. > > As currently written I don't think the document fulfill IETF's rules on > making the text version the authoritative one. As it is very hard to > understand the text version. > > Cheers > > Magnus Westerlund > > IETF Transport Area Director > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > Multimedia Technologies, Ericsson Research EAB/TVM > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > Ericsson AB | Phone +46 10 7148287 > Färögatan 6 | Mobile +46 73 0949079 > SE-164 80 Stockholm, Sweden| mailto: magnus.westerlund@ericsson.com > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > _______________________________________________ > nsis mailing list > nsis@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/nsis -- Xiaoming Fu, http://user.informatik.uni-goettingen.de/~fu
- [NSIS] AD evaluation of draft-ietf-nsis-ntlp-stat… Magnus Westerlund
- Re: [NSIS] AD evaluation of draft-ietf-nsis-ntlp-… Xiaoming Fu
- Re: [NSIS] AD evaluation of draft-ietf-nsis-ntlp-… Xiaoming Fu
- Re: [NSIS] AD evaluation of draft-ietf-nsis-ntlp-… Magnus Westerlund