Re: [NSIS] AD evaluation of draft-ietf-nsis-ntlp-statemechine-08
Magnus Westerlund <magnus.westerlund@ericsson.com> Fri, 26 February 2010 13:20 UTC
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Subject: Re: [NSIS] AD evaluation of draft-ietf-nsis-ntlp-statemechine-08
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Thank you, A great improvement. I will now start IETF last call on this. Magnus Xiaoming Fu skrev 2010-02-12 12:06: > Hi Magnus, > > We have updated the ID according to your comments, with the following > changes: > 1. TXT diagrams added > 2. Description of transitions improved > 3. Transitions' numbering re-ordered for better reading > 4. TXT tables touched to follow the model: transition->details > > The new version can be found in: > http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-nsis-ntlp-statemachine-09.txt > http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-nsis-ntlp-statemachine-09.pdf > > Diff from previous version: > http://tools.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-nsis-ntlp-statemachine-09 > > Many thanks again for your helpful suggestions! > > Best regards, > Xiaoming > > Magnus Westerlund wrote: >> Hi, >> >> I have reviewed the GIST state machine document and have the following >> comment: >> >> Can't the text version be imporved in relation to the state diagram? >> Couldn't the state and the transitions be included in a figure with only >> the note numbers on the transitions. Then include the tables below them, >> at least making the text version somewhat usable. >> >> As currently written I don't think the document fulfill IETF's rules on >> making the text version the authoritative one. As it is very hard to >> understand the text version. >> >> Cheers >> >> Magnus Westerlund >> >> IETF Transport Area Director >> ---------------------------------------------------------------------- >> Multimedia Technologies, Ericsson Research EAB/TVM >> ---------------------------------------------------------------------- >> Ericsson AB | Phone +46 10 7148287 >> Färögatan 6 | Mobile +46 73 0949079 >> SE-164 80 Stockholm, Sweden| mailto: magnus.westerlund@ericsson.com >> ---------------------------------------------------------------------- >> _______________________________________________ >> nsis mailing list >> nsis@ietf.org >> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/nsis > -- Magnus Westerlund IETF Transport Area Director ---------------------------------------------------------------------- Multimedia Technologies, Ericsson Research EAB/TVM ---------------------------------------------------------------------- Ericsson AB | Phone +46 10 7148287 Färögatan 6 | Mobile +46 73 0949079 SE-164 80 Stockholm, Sweden| mailto: magnus.westerlund@ericsson.com ----------------------------------------------------------------------
- [NSIS] AD evaluation of draft-ietf-nsis-ntlp-stat… Magnus Westerlund
- Re: [NSIS] AD evaluation of draft-ietf-nsis-ntlp-… Xiaoming Fu
- Re: [NSIS] AD evaluation of draft-ietf-nsis-ntlp-… Xiaoming Fu
- Re: [NSIS] AD evaluation of draft-ietf-nsis-ntlp-… Magnus Westerlund