[Ntp] Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-ietf-ntp-yang-data-model-15: (with COMMENT)
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Subject: [Ntp] Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-ietf-ntp-yang-data-model-15: (with COMMENT)
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Roman Danyliw has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-ntp-yang-data-model-15: No Objection When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html for more information about DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ntp-yang-data-model/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- Thank you to Takeshi Takahashi for the SECDIR review. ** YANG. feature deprecated. Typo. s/availaible/available/ ** YANG. Crypto algorithms. AES-CMAC has a reference but the others don’t. Consider adding them. ** Section 9.1. Typo. s/would used the an/would use an/ ** Section 11. A few clarifying items on describing the sensitivity of nodes: For writable nodes: -- /ntp/authentication/authentication-keys: The entries in the list includes all the NTP authentication keys. Altering this list could cause a disruption for clients and peers (for servers); or prevent a client from accessing a server. For readable notes: -- /ntp/authentication/authentication-keys. Recommend being clearer on the risk: s/can be exploited/can be exploited to permit unauthorized access to the NTP service/ -- /ntp/authentication and /ntp/access-rules - The entries in the list include the authentication and access control configurations. Exposure of these nodes could reveal network topology or trust relationship.
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