Re: [Ntp] Zaheduzzaman Sarker's No Objection on draft-ietf-ntp-yang-data-model-15: (with COMMENT)

Dhruv Dhody <dhruv.ietf@gmail.com> Thu, 09 December 2021 17:01 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Ntp] Zaheduzzaman Sarker's No Objection on draft-ietf-ntp-yang-data-model-15: (with COMMENT)
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Hi Zaheduzzaman,

Firstly let me apologize for this very late reply. Secondly thanks for your
review. I was finally able to make all the changes.

On Wed, Jun 30, 2021 at 8:53 PM Zaheduzzaman Sarker via Datatracker <
noreply@ietf.org> wrote:

> Zaheduzzaman Sarker has entered the following ballot position for
> draft-ietf-ntp-yang-data-model-15: No Objection
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> Thanks for the efforts on this document.
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> I support Éric Vyncke's discuss.
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> I also think adding reference to RFC 1305 in section 5 and section 6
> creates a
> bit of confusion when this document says it defines YANG model for RFC
> 5905.
> Also it is a fact that RFC 1305 is obsoleted by RFC 5905. So is this yang
> model
> also applicable to NTPv3? if not please mention, if so please mention and
> consider removing references to RFC 1305.
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Dhruv: Since the YANG model allows the version to be set to 3, it can be
used to configure NTPv3. I have added text to make this clearer.

Thanks!
Dhruv

Diff:
https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url1=draft-ietf-ntp-yang-data-model-15&url2=https://raw.githubusercontent.com/dhruvdhody/ietf/master/draft-ietf-ntp-yang-data-model-16.txt
Working Copy:
https://raw.githubusercontent.com/dhruvdhody/ietf/master/draft-ietf-ntp-yang-data-model-16.txt

Consolidated Review Status:
https://notes.ietf.org/draft-ietf-ntp-yang-data-model