Re: [nvo3] Jim Guichard's No Objection on draft-ietf-nvo3-evpn-applicability-05: (with COMMENT)

["Jorge Rabadan (Nokia)" <[e-mail]>]

Hi Jim,

Thank you very much for your review!
We have removed the “Conventions Used in this Document” as per Lars’ comments, and updated all the references as per your request.

Thanks,
Jorge

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Date: Thursday, April 20, 2023 at 6:00 PM
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COMMENT:
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This is a nicely written document and I have no specific technical comments.
>From an editorial perspective:

- The placement of Section 6 "Conventions Used in this Document" is odd as it
appears after the conclusion section of the document. I would suggest moving it
closer to the beginning of the document. - There are several references that
are outdated so please correct these:

  == Outdated reference: A later version (-09) exists of
     draft-ietf-nvo3-encap-08

  == Outdated reference: A later version (-09) exists of
     draft-ietf-bess-evpn-lsp-ping-08

  == Outdated reference: A later version (-10) exists of
     draft-ietf-bess-evpn-pref-df-09

  == Outdated reference: A later version (-09) exists of
     draft-ietf-bess-evpn-irb-mcast-07

  == Outdated reference: A later version (-05) exists of
     draft-ietf-bess-evpn-geneve-04

  == Outdated reference: A later version (-05) exists of
     draft-ietf-bess-evpn-mvpn-seamless-interop-04

  == Outdated reference: A later version (-06) exists of
     draft-sajassi-bess-secure-evpn-05

  == Outdated reference: A later version (-07) exists of
     draft-ietf-bess-rfc7432bis-04