[OAUTH-WG] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-oauth-access-token-jwt-11

Roni Even via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Sun, 07 February 2021 09:28 UTC

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Reviewer: Roni Even
Review result: Ready with Nits

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Document: draft-ietf-oauth-access-token-jwt-??
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review Date: 2021-02-07
IETF LC End Date: 2021-02-09
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary:
The document is ready for publication as a standard track RFC with nit

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:
In section 3 the get example has client_id as s6BhdRkqt3 and the claims has s6BhdRkqt3_