Re: [OAUTH-WG] broken links in draft-ietf-oauth-introspection-11

Brian Campbell <bcampbell@pingidentity.com> Sun, 19 July 2015 14:51 UTC

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Subject: Re: [OAUTH-WG] broken links in draft-ietf-oauth-introspection-11
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Barry explained the tools issue that causes this and how to work around it
a while back on the JOSE list:
http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/jose/current/msg04571.html

On Sun, Jul 19, 2015 at 2:09 PM, John Bradley <ve7jtb@ve7jtb.com> wrote:

> Remember tools is not using the XML to render the HTML directly, it is
> marking up the text version.   This bites me all the time as well.
>
> The text version needs to render to “Section 3.3 of RFC 6749” to get Rfcmarkup
> tool <http://tools.ietf.org/tools/rfcmarkup/index> to render it
> correctly.
>
> The trailing of OAuth 2.0 messes up Rfcmarkup.
>
> I am looking at fixing PIXE for the RFC editor so this happens to be a
> current issue for me, as I did the same thing because that is what produces
> the best HTML output from XML2RFC.
>
> What I have learned is to NOT format looking at the html output from
> XML2RFC as it leads you in the wrong direction,  output as text then run
> through Rfcmarkup to see what the version on the document tracker will look
> like.
>
> Hope this saves you some time.
>
> John B.
>
>
> On Jul 19, 2015, at 7:05 AM, Justin Richer <jricher@mit.edu> wrote:
>
> Thanks, those are artifacts in the rendered XML, I’ll look into fixing
> them.
>
>  — Justin
>
> On Jul 19, 2015, at 3:24 AM, Aaron Parecki <aaron@parecki.com> wrote:
>
> In section 2.2,
> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-oauth-introspection-11#section-2.2
> the "scope" description references section 3.3 of RFC6749, but the
> hyperlink contains just the fragment #section-3.3 which then points to the
> current page. The same problem exists with the "token_type" parameter.
> Additionally, I believe the token type link should point to section 7.1 (
> https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc6749#section-7.1) which is where token
> types are defined. Thanks!
>
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