Re: [OAUTH-WG] broken links in draft-ietf-oauth-introspection-11

Justin Richer <jricher@mit.edu> Sun, 19 July 2015 05:05 UTC

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Subject: Re: [OAUTH-WG] broken links in draft-ietf-oauth-introspection-11
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Thanks, those are artifacts in the rendered XML, I’ll look into fixing them.

 — Justin

> On Jul 19, 2015, at 3:24 AM, Aaron Parecki <aaron@parecki.com> wrote:
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> In section 2.2, https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-oauth-introspection-11#section-2.2 <https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-oauth-introspection-11#section-2.2> the "scope" description references section 3.3 of RFC6749, but the hyperlink contains just the fragment #section-3.3 which then points to the current page. The same problem exists with the "token_type" parameter. Additionally, I believe the token type link should point to section 7.1 (https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc6749#section-7.1 <https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc6749#section-7.1>) which is where token types are defined. Thanks!
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