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Some editorial quirks

YANG
 revision reference
the text value is not quite the same as the title of the I-D; perhaps both are not quite right

leaf shared-secret
/shared keys/shared secrets/

should we recommend improving the entropy with mixed case, digits, punctuation?  I note that the example lacks punctuation.  A plus sign might be appropriate!

Tom Petch

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Subject: [OPSAWG] Last Call: <draft-ietf-opsawg-tacacs-yang-09.txt> (YANG Data Model for TACACS+) to Proposed Standard


The IESG has received a request from the Operations and Management Area
Working Group WG (opsawg) to consider the following document: - 'YANG Data
Model for TACACS+'
  <draft-ietf-opsawg-tacacs-yang-09.txt> as Proposed Standard

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Abstract


   This document defines a TACACS+ client YANG module, that augments the
   System Management data model, defined in RFC 7317, to allow devices
   to make use of TACACS+ servers for centralized Authentication,
   Authorization and Accounting.

   The YANG module in this document conforms to the Network Management
   Datastore Architecture (NMDA) defined in RFC 8342.




The file can be obtained via
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-opsawg-tacacs-yang/



No IPR declarations have been submitted directly on this I-D.


The document contains these normative downward references.
See RFC 3967 for additional information:
    rfc8907: The Terminal Access Controller Access-Control System Plus (TACACS+) Protocol (Informational - Internent Engineering Task Force (IETF))




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