Re: [OPSAWG] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8907 (7754)

"Rob Wilton (rwilton)" <rwilton@cisco.com> Fri, 12 January 2024 16:57 UTC

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From: "Rob Wilton (rwilton)" <rwilton@cisco.com>
To: Rebecca VanRheenen <rvanrheenen@amsl.com>
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Hi Rebecca, authors, OPSAWG,

I think that this errata is valid for both 5.1 and 6.1.  I also noted a similar bug for 5.3 for the user_msg_len field.  I’ve updated the errata report to also cover this.  My intent is verify this errata.

Authors, OPSAWG, please let me know if you have any opinion on this.

Regards,
Rob



From: Rebecca VanRheenen <rvanrheenen@amsl.com>
Date: Wednesday, 10 January 2024 at 17:34
To: Rob Wilton (rwilton) <rwilton@cisco.com>
Cc: jpaulovf@gmail.com <jpaulovf@gmail.com>, thorstendlux@google.com <thorstendlux@google.com>, andrej@ota.si <andrej@ota.si>, Douglas Gash (dcmgash) <dcmgash@cisco.com>, carrel@ipsec.org <carrel@ipsec.org>, lol.grant@gmail.com <lol.grant@gmail.com>, opsawg@ietf.org <opsawg@ietf.org>, RFC Editor <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org>
Subject: Re: [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8907 (7754)
Hi Robert,

We are unable to verify this erratum that the submitter marked as editorial, so we changed the Type to “Technical”. As Stream Approver, please review and set the Status and Type accordingly (see the definitions at https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata-definitions/).

Note: A similar issue appears in Section 5.1 (perhaps “user field” here should also read “rem_addr” field):

      The rem_addr_len indicates the length of the user
      field, in bytes.

You may review the report at:
https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid7754

Information on how to verify errata reports can be found at:
https://www.rfc-editor.org/how-to-verify/

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Thank you.

RFC Editor/rv


> On Jan 10, 2024, at 4:36 AM, RFC Errata System <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org> wrote:
>
> The following errata report has been submitted for RFC8907,
> "The Terminal Access Controller Access-Control System Plus (TACACS+) Protocol".
>
> --------------------------------------
> You may review the report below and at:
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid7754
>
> --------------------------------------
> Type: Editorial
> Reported by: Joao Fracarolli <jpaulovf@gmail.com>
>
> Section: 6.1
>
> Original Text
> -------------
> The rem_addr_len indicates the length of the port field, in bytes.
>
> Corrected Text
> --------------
> The rem_addr_len indicates the length of the rem_addr field, in bytes.
>
> Notes
> -----
> Substitute "port field" with "rem_addr field"
>
> Instructions:
> -------------
> This erratum is currently posted as "Reported". (If it is spam, it
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>
> --------------------------------------
> RFC8907 (draft-ietf-opsawg-tacacs-18)
> --------------------------------------
> Title               : The Terminal Access Controller Access-Control System Plus (TACACS+) Protocol
> Publication Date    : September 2020
> Author(s)           : T. Dahm, A. Ota, D.C. Medway Gash, D. Carrel, L. Grant
> Category            : INFORMATIONAL
> Source              : Operations and Management Area Working Group
> Area                : Operations and Management
> Stream              : IETF
> Verifying Party     : IESG
>