[OPSEC] Feedback on draft-gont-opsec-ipv6-host-scanning-02 (was Re: Call for WG adoption - Network Reconnaissance in IPv6 Networks)
Fernando Gont <fgont@si6networks.com> Fri, 30 November 2012 22:47 UTC
Return-Path: <fgont@si6networks.com>
X-Original-To: opsec@ietfa.amsl.com
Delivered-To: opsec@ietfa.amsl.com
Received: from localhost (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 5106121F84E1 for <opsec@ietfa.amsl.com>; Fri, 30 Nov 2012 14:47:21 -0800 (PST)
X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com
X-Spam-Flag: NO
X-Spam-Score: -2.299
X-Spam-Level:
X-Spam-Status: No, score=-2.299 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[AWL=0.300, BAYES_00=-2.599]
Received: from mail.ietf.org ([64.170.98.30]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id hqA6hYzyog1T for <opsec@ietfa.amsl.com>; Fri, 30 Nov 2012 14:47:20 -0800 (PST)
Received: from web01.jbserver.net (web01.jbserver.net [93.186.182.34]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id BF7A521F84C6 for <opsec@ietf.org>; Fri, 30 Nov 2012 14:47:20 -0800 (PST)
Received: from 187-135-17-190.fibertel.com.ar ([190.17.135.187] helo=[192.168.1.113]) by web01.jbserver.net with esmtpsa (TLSv1:DHE-RSA-CAMELLIA256-SHA:256) (Exim 4.80.1) (envelope-from <fgont@si6networks.com>) id 1TeZM2-0004ne-8D; Fri, 30 Nov 2012 23:47:07 +0100
Message-ID: <50B9348D.5030108@si6networks.com>
Date: Fri, 30 Nov 2012 19:34:53 -0300
From: Fernando Gont <fgont@si6networks.com>
User-Agent: Mozilla/5.0 (X11; Linux x86_64; rv:17.0) Gecko/17.0 Thunderbird/17.0
MIME-Version: 1.0
To: John Schiel <jschiel@flowtools.net>
References: <67832B1175062E48926BF3CB27C49B240C8326F5@xmb-aln-x12.cisco.com> <CABmZaCO1NOpEtjgcQEXxEphV=Mwjbnhe_pGmjnr5QhN0aVpgpw@mail.gmail.com>
In-Reply-To: <CABmZaCO1NOpEtjgcQEXxEphV=Mwjbnhe_pGmjnr5QhN0aVpgpw@mail.gmail.com>
X-Enigmail-Version: 1.4.6
Content-Type: text/plain; charset="windows-1252"
Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit
Cc: "opsec@ietf.org" <opsec@ietf.org>
Subject: [OPSEC] Feedback on draft-gont-opsec-ipv6-host-scanning-02 (was Re: Call for WG adoption - Network Reconnaissance in IPv6 Networks)
X-BeenThere: opsec@ietf.org
X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.12
Precedence: list
List-Id: opsec wg mailing list <opsec.ietf.org>
List-Unsubscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/options/opsec>, <mailto:opsec-request@ietf.org?subject=unsubscribe>
List-Archive: <http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/opsec>
List-Post: <mailto:opsec@ietf.org>
List-Help: <mailto:opsec-request@ietf.org?subject=help>
List-Subscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/opsec>, <mailto:opsec-request@ietf.org?subject=subscribe>
X-List-Received-Date: Fri, 30 Nov 2012 22:47:21 -0000
Hi, John, Thanks so much for your feedback! Please find my comments in-line.... On 11/30/2012 02:26 AM, John Schiel wrote: > A few nits: > > * Third paragraph in the introduction, "One one hand". Perhaps "On one hand" ? Yep. Fixed! > * Title of section 2 should be fully bolded, missing bold on 'Techniques' This is an artifact of the tools at http://tools.ietf.org which d the automatic conversion from TXT to HTML (I will report this to the tool authors) -- the source itself (TXT) does not support formatting: <http://tools.ietf.org/id/draft-gont-opsec-ipv6-host-scanning-02.txt> > * 3.1.1.4. Stable Privacy-Enhanced Addresses > > In response to the predictability issues discussed in Section 3.1.1.1 > and the privacy issues discussed in , the IETF is currently ** > (discussed in what,3.1.1.2? ) I'd say "draft-ietf-6man-stable-privacy-addresses". Thanks! Best regards, -- Fernando Gont SI6 Networks e-mail: fgont@si6networks.com PGP Fingerprint: 6666 31C6 D484 63B2 8FB1 E3C4 AE25 0D55 1D4E 7492
- [OPSEC] Call for WG adoption - Network Reconnaiss… Gunter Van de Velde (gvandeve)
- Re: [OPSEC] Call for WG adoption - Network Reconn… Arturo Servin
- Re: [OPSEC] Call for WG adoption - Network Reconn… John Schiel
- [OPSEC] Feedback on draft-gont-opsec-ipv6-host-sc… Fernando Gont