Re: [Pals] Ben Campbell's No Objection on draft-ietf-pals-p2mp-pw-03: (with COMMENT)

"Parag Jain (paragj)" <paragj@cisco.com> Wed, 30 August 2017 19:11 UTC

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From: "Parag Jain (paragj)" <paragj@cisco.com>
To: Ben Campbell <ben@nostrum.com>, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
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Thread-Topic: [Pals] Ben Campbell's No Objection on draft-ietf-pals-p2mp-pw-03: (with COMMENT)
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Subject: Re: [Pals] Ben Campbell's No Objection on draft-ietf-pals-p2mp-pw-03: (with COMMENT)
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Hi Ben

I ran idnits on the draft and did not find any issues. Pls see the output below.

Thanks
Parag

idnits 2.14.01  /var/www/.idnits


tmp/draft-ietf-pals-p2mp-pw-lsp-ping-05.txt:

  Checking boilerplate required by RFC 5378 and the IETF Trust (see
  http://trustee.ietf.org/license-info):
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     No issues found here.

  Checking nits according to http://www.ietf.org/id-info/1id-guidelines.txt:
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     No issues found here.

  Checking nits according to http://www.ietf.org/id-info/checklist :
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     No issues found here.

  Miscellaneous warnings:
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  -- The document date (August 21, 2017) is 9 days in the past.  Is this         ⇐ this is expected and nogt an issue.
     intentional?


  Checking references for intended status: Proposed Standard
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     (See RFCs 3967 and 4897 for information about using normative references
     to lower-maturity documents in RFCs)

     No issues found here.

     Summary: 0 errors (**), 0 flaws (~~), 0 warnings (==), 1 comment (--).


On 2017-08-28, 10:43 PM, "Pals on behalf of Ben Campbell" <pals-bounces@ietf.org on behalf of ben@nostrum.com> wrote:

    Ben Campbell has entered the following ballot position for
    draft-ietf-pals-p2mp-pw-03: No Objection
    
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    COMMENT:
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    Please check idnits. It flags some issues that should be resolved, especially
    2119 language issues.
    
    The security considerations seem inadequate. I'm no expert here, but it seems
    like adding p2mp support in addition to p2p support has a good chance of
    creating some new considerations. If it really doesn't, it would be helpful to
    see arguments to that effect.
    
    
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