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Re: [Pals] Benoit Claise's No Objection on draft-ietf-pals-endpoint-fast-protection-04: (with COMMENT)

Yimin Shen <yshen@juniper.net> Fri, 16 December 2016 19:38 UTC

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From: Yimin Shen <yshen@juniper.net>
To: Greg Mirsky <gregimirsky@gmail.com>, Benoit Claise <bclaise@cisco.com>
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Subject: Re: [Pals] Benoit Claise's No Objection on draft-ietf-pals-endpoint-fast-protection-04: (with COMMENT)
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Hi Greg,

Thanks for your review, and nice catch ! We will fix this.

Thanks,

-- Yimin


From: Greg Mirsky <gregimirsky@gmail.com>
Date: Thursday, December 15, 2016 at 11:11 AM
To: Benoit Claise <bclaise@cisco.com>
Cc: The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>, "draft-ietf-pals-endpoint-fast-protection@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-pals-endpoint-fast-protection@ietf.org>, "pals-chairs@ietf.org" <pals-chairs@ietf.org>, Susan Hares <shares@ndzh.com>, "pals@ietf.org" <pals@ietf.org>, Stewart Bryant <stewart.bryant@gmail.com>
Subject: Re: [Pals] Benoit Claise's No Objection on draft-ietf-pals-endpoint-fast-protection-04: (with COMMENT)
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Resent-Date: Thursday, December 15, 2016 at 11:12 AM

Dear Authors, Benoit, et. al,
I've just noticed, from Benoit comment to p.10 of the document, that BFD, defined in RFC 5880, being mistakenly expanded as Bidirectional Failure Detection while it is Bidirectional Forwarding Detection.

Regards,
Greg

On Thu, Dec 15, 2016 at 5:46 AM, Benoit Claise <bclaise@cisco.com<mailto:bclaise@cisco.com>> wrote:
Benoit Claise has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-pals-endpoint-fast-protection-04: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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Editorial nits (From Sue Hares, part of her OPS-DIR review)

1.       Page 10  - style makes difficult reading of sentence  (very
minor nit).

OLD /A PLR MUST Be able to detect a failure by using a rapid mechanism,
such as physical layer failure detection, Bidirectional failure detection
(BFD) [RFC5880], etc. /

NEW /A PLR MUST Be able to detect a failure by using a rapid mechanism,
such as physical layer failure detection, Bidirectional failure detection
(BFD) [RFC5880], and others/

2.       Page 32 – difficult to parse sentence

      Old/For Encoding type, 1 is defined for PWid FEC element format,
and 2 is defined for the Generalized PWid FEC Element format [RFC4447]./

      New/ For type encoding type, the following two values are defined
within this document:

-          Type 1 for PWid FEC element format (see section 6.4.1.), and

-          Type 2 for Generalized PWid FEC Element format [RFC4447


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