Re: [Pana] References

Hi Alper,

I suggested that we could keep the sentence but to change "recommended" fro something else...
We may put something like:

"The readers are invited to read the PANA Framework document [I-D.ietf-pana-framework]
to find further details on the general PANA functional elements, high-level call flow,
and deployment environments."

Just to indicate that such info details exist... But not in this document!

Lionel

> -----Message d'origine-----
> De : pana-bounces@ietf.org [mailto:pana-bounces@ietf.org] De 
> la part de Alper Yegin
> Envoyé : jeudi 13 mars 2008 15:07
> À : pana@ietf.org
> Objet : [Pana] References
> 
> 
> We discussed these two issues during the PANA WG meeting on 
> Wednesday. Now running this by the ML...
> 
> RFC Editor said:
> 
> ----------8<------------------
> Our editor has started working on 
> <draft-ietf-pana-pana-18.txt>, and points out that Section 1 states:
> 
>    These components are
>    described in separate documents (see [I-D.ietf-pana-framework] and
>    [I-D.ietf-dhc-paa-option]).  The readers are recommended to read
>    the PANA Framework document [I-D.ietf-pana-framework] prior to
>    reading this protocol specification document.
> 
> We note that <draft-ietf-pana-framework> is listed as an 
> informative reference, but it seems strange that it is 
> recommended reading that should take place before reading the 
> current <draft-ietf-pana-pana> document.  
> -------------8<-----------------------------------
> 
> There was an agreement at the meeting to delete the last 
> sentence ("The readers ... document.") to avoid confusion.
> 
> ...
> 
> We also discussed if we should provide informative references 
> to pana specification documents (pana-pana, pana-ipsec) from 
> framework document
> (pana-framework) instead of the normative ones as currently 
> done in the document. There was no objection to this change.
> 
> 
> Unless there is objection in the next few days, we are going 
> to make these changes. 
> 
> 
> Alper 
> 
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