Re: [PANRG] On the new text on ECN: draft-irtf-panrg-what-not-to-do-16

Spencer Dawkins at IETF <spencerdawkins.ietf@gmail.com> Mon, 22 March 2021 15:56 UTC

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Subject: Re: [PANRG] On the new text on ECN: draft-irtf-panrg-what-not-to-do-16
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Hi, Gorry,

I'm starting to work on the updates to the ECN section
of draft-irtf-panrg-what-not-to-do, and wanted to reply to this question
specifically --

On Thu, Mar 11, 2021 at 10:13 AM Gorry Fairhurst <gorry@erg.abdn.ac.uk>
wrote:

>
> ————
>
> Is this a typo?: /Cannot be recovered at TCP layer/
> - it seems like a partial sentence, does need a /This.../
>

Yeah. That is a quote from
https://www.ietf.org/proceedings/68/slides/tsvarea-3/sld1.htm, so it does
need a "This" or something like that, but since it's a quote, I left it and
added "(sic)" afterwards.

Thanks for the careful read, and for asking before the RFC Editor asks the
same question :-)

Best,

Spencer