[Pce] 答复: Secdir early review of draft-ietf-pce-pcep-extension-native-ip-29
Aijun Wang <wangaijun@tsinghua.org.cn> Thu, 01 February 2024 03:41 UTC
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Subject: [Pce] 答复: Secdir early review of draft-ietf-pce-pcep-extension-native-ip-29
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Hi, Ned: Thanks for your review. Some detail replies are inline below. If you have no further comments, I will upload it to address your concerns/comments then. Aijun Wang -----邮件原件----- 发件人: forwardingalgorithm@ietf.org [mailto:forwardingalgorithm@ietf.org] 代表 Ned Smith via Datatracker 发送时间: 2024年2月1日 3:54 收件人: secdir@ietf.org 抄送: draft-ietf-pce-pcep-extension-native-ip.all@ietf.org; pce@ietf.org 主题: [Pce] Secdir early review of draft-ietf-pce-pcep-extension-native-ip-29 Reviewer: Ned Smith Review result: Has Nits 1) Section 5 header should capitalize "messages" 【WAJ】:Done, together with the sub section 5.1 and 5.2 2) The introduction says, "It is necessary to use the central control mode described in [RFC8283]". This reads like a mandatory constraint on implementers but is listed as an informative reference. If the I-D doesn't actually depend on RFC8283, but the authors are assuming this context, then the wording could be adjusted to describe the author's assumptions rather than describe it in (almost) normative style. Alternatively, it is a normative requirement that shouldn't exist in the introduction and the reference should move to the normative list. 【WAJ】We would like to keep it as an informative reference. How about the following description:(change "necessary" to "feasible") "It is feasible to use the central control mode described in RFC 8283... ... " or your suggestions? 3) Figure 16 - It isn't clear if TBD1 and TBD2 are gaps in the I-D that the WG has yet to complete vs. extension / extensibility properties that a subsequent I-D might define. 【WAJ】TBD1 and TBD2 will be assigned the values by the IANA later. They are added after the other early IANA temporary allocations. 4) Section 10 "The communication of PCE and PCC described in this document should also follow the same procedures, treat the three newly defined objects (BPI, EPR, PPA) associated with the same symbolic path name as the attribute of the same path in the LSP-DB (LSP State Database)." The "should" in this sentence reads as though it is normative. Consider making it upper case. The sentence is potentially easily misread as it isn't clear which procedures is meant by "...the same procedures,...". 【WAJ】How about the following descriptions: The communication of PCE and PCC described in this document SHOULD follow the state synchronization procedures described in RFC8232, treat the three newly defined objects (BPI, EPR, PPA) associated with the same symbolic path name as the attribute of the same path in the LSP-DB (LSP State Database). _______________________________________________ Pce mailing list Pce@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/pce
- [Pce] Secdir early review of draft-ietf-pce-pcep-… Ned Smith via Datatracker
- [Pce] 答复: Secdir early review of draft-ietf-pce-p… Aijun Wang
- Re: [Pce] 答复: Secdir early review of draft-ietf-p… Smith, Ned