[pcp] Comments on draft-ietf-pcp-optimize-keepalives-00

"Reinaldo Penno (repenno)" <repenno@cisco.com> Fri, 11 October 2013 11:16 UTC

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From: "Reinaldo Penno (repenno)" <repenno@cisco.com>
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I reviewed this draft for a possible WGLC but I do not think it is ready.
My summary is that this draft has lots of text related to detection of PCP
unaware NAT/FW using STUN which IMO belong in a separate draft, or some
other document since it is generic text. Maybe the WG sees value in having
a separate document that talks exclusively about detection of PCP unaware
FWs.

This draft could just say "assuming all NAT/FW in the path are PCP
aware..." and take it from there since the goal is optimizing keep-alive
and not standardizing detection mechanisms.

Removing all detection text would make this draft quite short and easier
to understand its purpose.

Thanks,

Reinaldo