Re: [pim] draft-ietf-pim-reserved-bits wglc

William Atwood <william.atwood@concordia.ca> Sun, 02 June 2019 02:40 UTC

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I support this document.

I have the following nits:

Section 1, para 2, line 5.  "the the" -> "the"

Section 5, para 1, line 3.  "allowing for 48 additional types by for
each of the three types"  I cannot parse this.  I assume that you want
to do something with 16*3 = 48, but this does not cut it.

Line 6.  "15.15 where" -> "15.15, where"

  Bill

On 2019-05-31 8:00 p.m., Mike McBride wrote:
> Hello good people of pim.
> 
> Today begins a two week wglc for draft-ietf-pim-reserved-bits. Please
> review the draft and reply with your support/non support. And have a
> great weekend.
> 
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-pim-reserved-bits/
> 
> thanks,
> mike
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