Re: [pim] Last Call: <draft-ietf-pim-msdp-yang-08.txt> (A YANG Data Model for Multicast Source Discovery Protocol (MSDP)) to Proposed Standard

[tom petch <[e-mail]>]

RFC8349 says that a new identity MUST be defined for a new control plane protocol - I see no such definition here

RFC8349 says that augments should be to control-plane-protocols/control-plane-protocol as is seen in the OSPF and the other LSR YANG modules; here I see an augment to control-plane-protocols which seems wrong to me

many features but no idea where to look them up - I think every YANG feature needs a YANG reference to an I-D/RFC

I find a list of features and references in the body of an I-D valuable

YANG modules must be plain text; [3618] in the module description does not look like plain text. Other references e.g. RFC8177 look ok although some have a space in them and some do not

leaf tcp-connection-source says that ipv4 must be enabled but the when statement does not test for enabled, just for configured

rpc clear peer clears everything if there is no address - this is fail danger, a specific value for clear all would IMHO be better engineering

XXXX is likely to mean this I-D/RFC but I always like to see a specific direction to the RFC Editor to that effect, just the once, somewhere near the front.

In the same vein, a direction to replace the dates with date of publication  would not go amiss

Tom Petch
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The IESG has received a request from the Protocols for IP Multicast WG (pim)
to consider the following document: - 'A YANG Data Model for Multicast Source
Discovery Protocol (MSDP)'
  <draft-ietf-pim-msdp-yang-08.txt> as Proposed Standard

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Abstract


   This document defines a YANG data model for the configuration and
   management of Multicast Source Discovery Protocol (MSDP) Protocol.




The file can be obtained via
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-pim-msdp-yang/

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