Re: [pim] AD Review of draft-ietf-pim-igmp-mld-snooping-yang-10

Hongji Zhao <hongji.zhao@ericsson.com> Mon, 01 June 2020 02:59 UTC

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From: Hongji Zhao <hongji.zhao@ericsson.com>
To: Alvaro Retana <aretana.ietf@gmail.com>
CC: "pim-chairs@ietf.org" <pim-chairs@ietf.org>, "pim@ietf.org" <pim@ietf.org>, Stig Venaas <stig@venaas.com>
Thread-Topic: AD Review of draft-ietf-pim-igmp-mld-snooping-yang-10
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Subject: Re: [pim] AD Review of draft-ietf-pim-igmp-mld-snooping-yang-10
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Hi Alvaro,

I have already remove the unused references and post a new version as draft-ietf-pim-igmp-mld-snooping-yang-12.
Thanks a lot for your comments.

BR/Hongji
赵宏吉

From: Alvaro Retana <aretana.ietf@gmail.com>
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To: Hongji Zhao <hongji.zhao@ericsson.com>
Cc: pim-chairs@ietf.org; pim@ietf.org; Stig Venaas <stig@venaas.com>
Subject: RE: AD Review of draft-ietf-pim-igmp-mld-snooping-yang-10

Hi!

I have requested the IETF Last Call to start.  There are just a couple of unused references that need to be removed:


  == Unused Reference: 'RFC4604' is defined on line 1813, but no explicit
     reference was found in the text

  == Unused Reference: 'RFC4607' is defined on line 1818, but no explicit
     reference was found in the text


You can take care of that with any other LC comments that may come in.

Thanks!!

Alvaro.