[precis] Ben Campbell's Yes on draft-ietf-precis-nickname-18: (with COMMENT)

"Ben Campbell" <ben@nostrum.com> Tue, 01 September 2015 04:50 UTC

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Subject: [precis] Ben Campbell's Yes on draft-ietf-precis-nickname-18: (with COMMENT)
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Yay! Just a few nits:

-- Abstract:
The abstract could be beefed up against? Maybe say what a nickname is in
this context?
[Edit: "Against"?  I meant "a bit".]

-- 1.1, first paragraph: "...participants to specify a nickname ..."
Plural agreement mismatch.

-- 1.1, 2nd paragraph:
People really use "petname" for this? Who knew?