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Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Unifying words in recovery draft (#3893)

Kazu Yamamoto <notifications@github.com> Mon, 13 July 2020 03:30 UTC

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@kazu-yamamoto commented on this pull request.



> @@ -615,7 +615,7 @@ a packet containing unacknowledged CRYPTO data earlier than the PTO expiry,
 subject to address validation limits; see Section 8.1 of {{QUIC-TRANSPORT}}.
 
 Peers can also use coalesced packets to ensure that each datagram elicits at
-least one acknowledgement.  For example, clients can coalesce an Initial packet
+least one acknowledgement.  For example, a client can coalesce an Initial packet

This is followed by "a server". Why are both singular and plural used in the same sentence?

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